I read through the sections of the document that I felt qualified to comment on -- the first sections through Developmental Math. It all looks really good and useful.
In the Dev Math section a paragraph starts with these two sentences:
Topics in developmental mathematics courses should be taught in depth and not as a preview of topics to come in later courses. For many students, any given mathematics course could be their last one.
I recommend deleting the second sentence. I doesn't seem to be true for Dev Math, else why would a student be taking a dev math course. And I don't think it contributes anything useful to the discussion of topics.
Kathryn Van Wagoner
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Kathryn Van Wagoner
Director, Developmental Mathematics
Weber State Univ
Ogden UT
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